A TV program makes me laugh.

2019-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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There was my favorite TV show namely infinite challenge. Whenever I saw the TV show, I couldn\'t stop laughing. Sometimes, the show was so fun, my tears came out. The TV show was ended but I can watch the show on the internet.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

This is a good composition.

You made use of simple and clear expressions.

It was easy to read and was very interesting.

Keep it up!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

There was my favorite TV show namely infinite challenge.

>> I had a favorite show before namely, \"Infinite Challenge.\"
Whenever I saw the TV show, I couldn\'t stop laughing.

>> Whenever I watched that TV show, I couldn\'t stop laughing.
Sometimes, the show was so fun, my tears came out.

>> Sometimes, the show was so fun that my tears came out.
The TV show was ended but I can watch the show on the internet.

>> The TV show has already ended but I can watch the show on the Internet.

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