A Typhoon's coming to Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Min!(\",)
We had been having monsoon rain continuously for about a month now. We are all praying to see the sun. Hopefully, this weekend.(\",)
~T. Lynn
A typhoon, named \'Soulik\' has reached the southern island, Jeju today.
>> correct!
It\'s approaching slowly toward to Seoul.
>> It\'s approaching Seoul slowly.
OR>> It\'s moving towards Seoul slowly.
I\'ve just receive alarming SMS messege from National Disaster and Safety control Center warning it\'s going pass directly through Seoul with very strong wind.
>> I\'ve just received an alarming SMS messege from the National Disaster and Safety control Center warning us that it\'s going to pass directly through Seoul with very strong wind.
I\'m afraid it\'s too strong to safely get my office tomorrow morning.
>> I\'m afraid it\'s too strong to safely get to my office tomorrow morning.
I hope it wouldn\'t make too much damage near my place and to my family and friends.
>> correct!
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