A very special book.
학생이 쓴 원문
I iove reading and I read book everyday.
I\'ve read comic and comedy but no book has touch me as much as Arsen Lupin.
There are many reasons why I find this book so touching what I found most touching was the Lupin\'s diguise.
He always disguise and stole some treasure.
I even didn\'t realize Lupin disguise and stole treasure.
I could tell Lupin\'s disguise was exellent.
I was so absorbing when he escape from jail.
Becuase of reading this book, I became a bigger fan of Lupin series.
I will keep reading this book.
Reading this book will make me more smarter. I highly recommend it for everyone who love absorbing to books!
강사 첨삭
Thanks for this John. Keep them coming. Have a great weekend!
I iove reading and I read book everyday.
>>> I love reading and I read books everyday.
I\'ve read comic and comedy but no book has touch me as much as Arsen Lupin.
>>> I\'ve read comic and comedy but no book has touched me as much as Arsen Lupin.
I\'ve read comic and comedy but no book has touch me as much as Arsen Lupin.
>>> I\'ve read comic and comedy but no book has touched me as much as Arsen Lupin.
There are many reasons why I find this book so touching what I found most touching was the Lupin\'s diguise.
>>> There are many reasons why I find this book so touching and what I found most touching was Lupin\'s disguise.
He always disguise and stole some treasure.
>>> He always put on a disguise and stole some treasure.
I even didn\'t realize Lupin disguise and stole treasure.
>>> I even didn\'t realize Lupin disguised and stole treasure.
I could tell Lupin\'s disguise was exellent.
>>> I could tell Lupin\'s disguise was excellent.
I was so absorbing when he escape from jail.
>>> I was so absorbed in the story when he escaped from jail.
Becuase of reading this book, I became a bigger fan of Lupin series.
>>> Because of reading this book, I became a bigger fan of Lupin series.
I will keep reading this book.
>>> correct
Reading this book will make me more smarter.
I will keep reading this book.
>>> correct
Reading this book will make me more smarter.
>>> Reading this book will make me much smarter.
I highly recommend it for everyone who love absorbing to books!
>>> I highly recommend it for everyone who loves being absorbed in books!
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