A walk in the clouds, 1995
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Dear [Name],
I found the movie name \" A walk in the clouds\". Main actor is Keanu Reeves.
This movie is a beautiful melodrama. If you have a chance to watch the movie, please watch it.
I watched the movie when I was a university student. As you watch the movie, you will feel a emotional moving.
If you watch the movie, Let\'s talk about it tomorrow!!
See you^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday to you. See you in a while in our class.
T .DON
I found the movie name \" A walk in the clouds\". Main actor is Keanu Reeves.
>> I found the title of the movie. It is \" A walk in the clouds\". The main actor is Keanu Reeves.
This movie is a beautiful melodrama. If you have a chance to watch the movie, please watch it.
>> CORRECT
I watched the movie when I was a university student. As you watch the movie, you will feel a emotional moving.
>> I watched the movie when I was a university student. As you watch the movie, you will be touched.
If you watch the movie, Let\'s talk about it tomorrow!!
>> CORRECT
See you^^
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