A worning out day
학생이 쓴 원문
I am very tired today, I don't know why i am so tired.
Actually, I am not busy at work. i have lots of free time at work.
I commute by my own car every working days(Monday to Friday)
강사 첨삭
Hi MARIA^^
Thank you for sending me a composition today.You did a good job! You were able to express yourself during our class and with your composition. Keep it up! I hope that you will not get tired of learning English. I enjoyed the interaction we had awhile ago.Have a wonderful day.Take a lot of rest tonight.See you tomorrow! Take Care on your way home.
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
I am very tired today, I don\'t know why i am so tired.
>> I am very tired today and I don\'t know why.
OR >> I feel tired today and I don\'t know why.Actually, I am not busy at work. i have lots of free time at work.
>> Actually I am not busy,I have a lot of free time at work.I commute by my own car every working days(Monday to Friday)
>> I travel by my car from Mondays to Fridays.
OR >> I use my car to go to work during weekdays.
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