A1. How control fatigue
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A1. How control fatigue
A2. Did you watch like this documentary(accident).
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Thank you for this Bill!
A1. How control fatigue
Fatigue is very important pilot. Because it could lead to seious situation. like can\'t process check list or forget and very seious is choose wrong decision
>>> Fatigue is very important for pilot because it could lead to serious situation, like being unable to process check list or forget and the most serious is choosing a wrong decision.
It is very danger.
>>> It is very dangerous.
>>> OR: It is quite dangerous.
So it is important to mange fatiuge well. In my case doing two thing.
>>> So it is important to mange fatigue well.
In my case doing two thing.
>>> In my case, I do two things.
first of all sleep is very important.
>>> correct
pilot experience jetleg.
>>> Pilots experience jetlag.
It is very hard to take sleep.
>>> OR: It is very hard to take a good sleep.
In spite of that must be sleep use comfortable codition and curtain.
>>> In spite of that, sleeping must be done with comfortable condition and curtain.
Not use drug
>>> Not by using medication.
Second is doing work out.
>>> correct
Doing work out and swaet.
>>> Doing workout and sweating.
And finash the work out take shower.
>>> And after finishing the workout, I take a shower.
After that is very good feelings.
>>> I feel very good after that.
and i think having good hobby is reduce fatigue.
>>> I also think having a good hobby can reduce fatigue.
But in my case work out is my hobby.
>>> But in my case, working out is my hobby.
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A2. Did you watch like this documentary.
Yes i was watch like this documentary.
>>> Yes, I watched a documentary like this.
this documentary is very famous in national geographic.
>>> correct
But I couldn\'t flight like this big aircraft.
>>> But I couldn\'t fly a big aircraft like this.
So i am not close with this.
>>> correct
>>> OR: So my experience is not close to this.
In spite of that i was thinking about like this accident.
>>> In spite of that, I was thinking about this accident.
this was very sad story but there was a lot to learn. Like diong checklist, method of control switch, contact controler.
>>> This was a very sad story but there was a lot to learn like doing a checklist, method of control switch and contact controller.
I hope there will bo no documentary due to fewer accidents.
>>> I hope there will be no more documentary due to fewer accidents.
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