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2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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What is an example of a time you and your friends/parents/relatives/grandparents had an argument or disagreement? Do you think it was related to generation gap I think, these days, the Information Techonology is alleviating the generation gap between the younsters and the seniors. Because anyone can access all the info of the world easily with his smartphone, there is not that much generation gap. I guess there is only conflict between the social ranks.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sung Hoon! Thank you for doing your homework. You did great! Have a nice day. ^^~
-TEACHER ELISHA-

I think, these days, the Information Techonology is alleviating the generation gap between the younsters and the seniors.

>> These days, I think technology is alleviating the generation gap between the youngsters and the seniors.
Because anyone can access all the info of the world easily with his smartphone, there is not that much generation gap.

>> Anyone can easily access all the information in the world using a smartphone, that is why the generation gap is diminishing.
I guess there is only conflict between the social ranks.

>> I guess there is only a conflict between social ranks.

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