aaaaaa...Transfomers 30th anniversary original artwork

Hello Will^^,

Thanks for sharing me this story.

I envy you! I love Transformers too!

I guess you went there because you will go back

to school tomorrow. aaawww=(

I hope that you had a great summer vacation after all.

I checked the content of your diary and I can see that you

are not that aware about the proper capitalization of words.

I want you to please study the corrections here.

Overall, you did a great job because you were able to

express your ideas well.^^

Thanks for this^^

Teacher Liza

Today is August 26th.

>> Correct

>> OR: Today is Tuesday, August 26.

and I was go to Transfomers 30th anniversary original artwork.

>>And I went to Transformer\'s 30th Anniversary of its original artworks.

this name is so long to tipe on this diary.

>>This word is a long word to type on this diary.

so I went there with my friend.

>> So I went there with my friends.

we met at the jamsil station.

>> We met at the Jamsil Station.

we went to dong de moon plasa by train.

>> And we went to Dond D moon Plaza by train.

It take 30 minutes.

>> It takes 30 minutes to get there.

we saw the real size of transfomers but it was a little short.

>>We saw the real size of the robots but I guess for me it was a little short.

It\'s only two big room!

>> Because it is only as big as two bed rooms.

we paint this costum of transfomer in the paper. and we made lego making transfomer.

>> BETTER: We painted the costumes of the Transformers in a paper and we made Transformers out of the Legos.

and it\'s done!ye, it\'s very small.and we eat lunch.

>> That\'s all. It was just a short time and after that we had our lunch.

also stick icecream.and we go to the Experience center and study with them.

>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: After that we had ice cream on stick then we went to the Experience Center and studied.

and we came bake to seoul and I went to home.

>> Then we came back to Seoul and I went home.