Abandoned dog
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes! I think I will buy in there! And this is just my think, when I think of animal shelters, something suddenly comes to mind. I think one of the reasons animal shelters were created that because of people\'s carelessness. We all have one task at a time, and because of the nature of human beings, we have the habit of getting thing done quickly, so we get bored easily and give up easily. In the state of having these habits, and we bring into dogs to their homes that think cherish we like family. Eventually, we think that it is natural for this dog to be in our house, and when we start to get tired of it, we sell it or throw it away. As the teacher said, some dogs others continue to trust and wait without knowing that they are dead. It\'s really sad and sad to think of killing or abandoning such dogs, but at the same time it makes me angry...You too, right?
강사 첨삭
Hello there Maria!
These narration of why people abandon their pets is really sad. If people think that they no longer need the company of a pet, they leave them astray which is really terrible. So, pet ownership needs to have rules and policies nowadays.
Thank you for telling me all of these. Great job on your homework!
See you in class tomorrow!
-T. Donna =)
>> Yes! I think I will adopt a pet there!
And this is just my think, when I think of animal shelters, something suddenly comes to mind.
>> And this is just what I think, when I think of animal shelters, something suddenly comes to mind.
I think one of the reasons animal shelters were created that because of people\'s carelessness.
>> I think one of the reasons why animal shelters were created were because of people\'s carelessness.
We all have one task at a time, and because of the nature of human beings, we have the habit of getting thing done quickly, so we get bored easily and give up easily.
>> We all have tasks at a time, and because of the nature of human beings, we have the habit of getting things done quickly, so we get bored easily and give up easily.
In the state of having these habits, and we bring into dogs to their homes that think cherish we like family.
>> In the state of having these habits, we bring dogs to their homes than think of cherishing them like family.
Eventually, we think that it is natural for this dog to be in our house, and when we start to get tired of it, we sell it or throw it away.
>> Correct!
As the teacher said, some dogs others continue to trust and wait without knowing that they are dead.
>> As the teacher said, some dogs continue to trust and wait without knowing that they are dead.
It\'s really sad and sad to think of killing or abandoning such dogs, but at the same time it makes me angry...You too, right?
>> It\'s really sad to think of killing or abandoning such dogs and at the same time it makes me angry. You too, right?
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