Abandoned stuff
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There are various things which I have to throw away in my house. But, I always procrastinate throwing them away because it is a nuisance. And everytime I try cleaning up my room, I think that \'this stuff will be helpful someday\' and I give up abandon it. This is the main reason why I have a variety of useless things.
Clothes are the first stuff. I like try many types of fashion, so there are a large number of clothes in my closet. But it is really problomatic that I frequently change my mind and my taste. my fashion taste in the past is definetly different from current taste. However I think that \'what a waste! I can\'t throw away these. These clothes look like brandnew ones.\' ... Maybe I have to donate these clothes to children in orphanage or throw away outmoded ones.
And books are another stuff. I couldn\'t abandon these books in a definitely same reason. Well, solution to this case is exactly same. Donating may be better than throwing away except for severly outdated ones.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I honestly have the same concerns. I guess, I was actually not alone. We have to declutter soon whether donating them or throwing them away, we must start gradually. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
There are various things which I have to throw away in my house.
>>Correct!
But, I always procrastinate throwing them away because it is a nuisance.
>>Correct!
And everytime I try cleaning up my room, I think that \'this stuff will be helpful someday\' and I give up abandon it.
>>And every time I try cleaning up my room, I think that \'this stuff will be helpful someday\' and I give up abandoning it.
This is the main reason why I have a variety of useless things.
>>Correct!
Clothes are the first stuff.
Clothes are the first stuff.
>>Correct!
I like try many types of fashion, so there are a large number of clothes in my closet.
>>I like trying various fashion styles, so there is a large number of clothes in my closet.
But it is really problomatic that I frequently change my mind and my taste.
>>But it is so problematic that I frequently change my mind and my taste.
my fashion taste in the past is definetly different from current taste.
>>My fashion taste in the past is definitely different from my current taste.
However I think that \'what a waste! I can\'t throw away these.
>>However, I always think: \'what a waste! I can\'t throw these away.
These clothes look like brandnew ones.\' ...
>>These clothes look like the brand new ones.
Maybe I have to donate these clothes to children in orphanage or throw away outmoded ones.
>>Maybe, I have to donate these clothes to children in orphanages or throw away the out of fashion ones.
And books are another stuff.
And books are another stuff.
>>Books are another cause of concern.
I couldn\'t abandon these books in a definitely same reason.
>>I couldn\'t abandon these books for the same, exact reason.
Well, solution to this case is exactly same.
>>Well, the solution to this case is exactly the same.
Donating may be better than throwing away except for severly outdated ones.
>>Donating may be better than throwing away except for the severely outdated ones.
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