ABBY
학생이 쓴 원문
I need to concentrate my all energy into final exam on next week.
I didn't get a high point on my last middle exam.
As I said, I will go abroad as an exchange student to America.
It is needed to get 3.6 point out of 4.5 for applying to Exchange Program and my GPA is now 3.5
I don't want to lose my chance by neck..
Another qualification is TOEFL score which is higher than 80
Actually I never have taken TOEFL but I prepared for it for a year especially Listening and Reading..
I find it very hard regarding Writing and Speaking.
However I will do my best and think positively.
After I finished my final exam. I will rejoin here.
The question I want ask was,, "which one is more between person who use Skype and person who use Mobile phone... ?"
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!Thank you for always trusting me in our class. I always feel good knowing that you stay honest with everything you tell me. Anyway, regarding your question, I guess it’s the same. It depends on you. The thing that you should consider is where would you be more comfortable. Would it be on cam or through phone alone? Anyway, why don’t you try to have a video class this time. But if you would always be out, I suggest that you get the mobile class. So that even if you’re at school or anywhere out of your home, I could still reach you out. Furthermore, you did a very good composition today. I wish you luck with everything you do. Be positive and always be confident as what I keep telling you. I’ll see you again in Power English. Have a great Friday and enjoy the rest of the week! Study hard! ^_^
T. Abby
ABBY
>> correct
>> Dear [Name],
>> Hi Abby!
I need to concentrate my all energy into final exam on next week.>> I need to give all my energy on my final exam next week.
>> I need to concentrate for my final exam next week.I didn't get a high point on my last middle exam.>> I didn’t get a high score on my last exam.
>> I didn’t get a high rating on my last middle exam.As I said, I will go abroad as an exchange student to America.>> correctIt is needed to get 3.6 point out of 4.5 for applying to Exchange Program and my GPA is now 3.5>> I need to get 3.6 score out of 4.5 in applying for an Exchange Program and my GPA is just at 3.5 now.I don't want to lose my chance by neck.. >> I don’t want to lose my chance.Another qualification is TOEFL score which is higher than 80 >> Another qualification for it would be my TOEFL score which should be higher than 80.Actually I never have taken TOEFL but I prepared for it for a year especially Listening and Reading.. >> Actually, I have never taken TOEFL exam yet but I prepared for it for a year, especially on the Listening and Reading part.I find it very hard regarding Writing and Speaking.>> I find it hard writing and speaking.
>> I find it so hard to write and speak.
>> I find the Writing and Speaking parts very hard.However I will do my best and think positively.>> correctAfter I finished my final exam. I will rejoin here.>> After I finish my final exam, I will continue/renew my class in Power English.The question I want ask was,, "which one is more between person who use Skype and person who use Mobile phone... ?"
>> There is just one question which I want to ask. Which is much better, a video class where we could see each other on cam, or the mobile class?
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