abduction

2022-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I can\'t understand how this is possible. Are these children adoped previously? I wonder why Korean parents take to Korea the children without the American parent\'s consent.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [이름]!
can you believe it? the article that I sent you has been deleted but you can find the story here 

http://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20221207000683

It mentioned that the children were his real children after he married a Korean woman. They had a \"small fight\" then the Korean woman flew back to Korea with her two children. 
This story is nice and the intriguing part is Korea does not anything, they are not giving back his children. What do yo think is the reason?
Lets\' discuss that later.
Aki~
I can\'t understand how this is possible.
>>> CORRECT!
Are these children adopted previously?
>>> Were these children adopted previously?
I wonder why Korean parents take to Korea the children without the American parent\'s consent.
>>> I wonder why these Korean parents take their children back to Korea without the American parent\'s consent.

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