Abduction

((Abduction))- story! The man drives to his house. He goes by cornfield. And he sings. After a while, One spaceship is come down! He is very scary and fall lifeless! Soon he opens his eyes, Oh no!!! He is in the spaceship! And aliens observes him! He doesn't want as it is. He shuts his eyes tight and he opens his eyes again slowly! OH, he is in his car. He sees the sky. But he sees only stars! He is scary. but once again he drives to his house and sings "Ghost riders in the sky!"

Hello there! Wow! What a wonderful story! Are you fascinated about aliens that much? ^_^ Anyway, here are the corrections I made for your sentences. See you later! --- Teacher Heidi ^^ ----   ((Abduction))- story! The man drives to his house. >>Correct. He goes by cornfield. And he sings. >>He goes to he cornfield and sings.After a while, One spaceship is come down! >>After a while, a spaceship came down! He is very scary and fall lifeless! >>He is very scared and falls lifeless!Soon he opens his eyes, Oh no!!! >>Correct. He is in the spaceship! And aliens observes him! >>He is in a spaceship and aliens are observing him!He doesn\'t want as it is. >>He doesn\'t want this. He shuts his eyes tight and he opens his eyes again slowly! >>Correct.OH, he is in his car. >>Correct. He sees the sky. But he sees only stars! >>He looks up the sky but he only sees stars! He is scary. but once again he drives to his house and sings \"Ghost riders in the sky!\" >>He is scared but once again he drives to his house while he sings \"Ghost riders in the sky\".