Abebe Bikila : barefoot marathoner
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Dear Teacher Don,
Abebe was a very famous marathoner, when I was child. He was a barefoot marathoner from Ethiopia
I think he was a poor boy. So he run everyday.
After all, he was a winner in olympic game.
He was a winner in Rome & Tokyo olympic.
But he was die 41 years old.
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Thank you for sharing this information. Have a great day ahead ^^
T. DON
Dear Teacher Don,
Abebe was a very famous marathoner, when I was child. He was a barefoot marathoner from Ethiopia
Abebe was a very famous marathoner, when I was child. He was a barefoot marathoner from Ethiopia
>> Abebe was very famous in marathon, when I was a child. He was barefooted when joining the marathon. He is from Ethiopia.
I think he was a poor boy. So he run everyday.
>> I think he was a poor boy. So he run every day.
After all, he was a winner in Olympic game.
>> After all, he was once a winner in an Olympic game.
He was a winner in Rome & Tokyo olympic.
>> He won in Rome & Tokyo Olympics.
But he was die 41 years old.
>> He died when he was 41 years old.
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