Abegail 2
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But as I have a conversation with you, I can naturally get into the conversation because you make me feel comfortable and lead me to talk more and listen to me well. ^^
So, after I hang up the phone, I feel very good and I can start the day with a good mood.
So, thank you very much. ^^
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But as I have a conversation with you, I can naturally get into the conversation because you make me feel comfortable and lead me to talk more and listen to me well. ^^
>>But as I start having conversation with you, I can naturally get into the topic easily because you make me feel comfortable and lead me to talk more and you listen to me very well.
So, after I hang up the phone, I feel very good and I can start the day with a good mood.>>So after I hang up the phone, I feel really good and that I start my day with a good mood.
So, thank you very much. ^^>>correct
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