abilities make people more attractive

2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When people get in love with someone, they have their own love stories. In the perspective of stranger, these can be very funny or childish story.but why they fall in love? some person started to love his/her partner because of kindness. Of course it can be attitude for their dream. a very simple thing like getting good score in a test can be a factor. I think all of thse thins are abilities. If someone have some ability which another people don't have, that make people more attractive. Sometimes, It came out from someone's exertion, authority, money and the charater of someone. For example, a man may like someone because of her temper even hot temper. and a woman may like someone because of the simple kindness. I think they had never have such a experiences, so that make someone more attractive. In some cases, a very simple word can make him/her very attractive.

강사 첨삭

[이름],

I am amazed! You did a lot of homework today. Hihihihi.

I am so blessed to have a great student like you.

Please don\'t stop improving your skills.

You just have to practice and keep in mind the corrections I give you.

Find time to go over your student page. I believe in you.

Teacher Nina


When people get in love with someone, they have their own love stories.

>> When a person fell in love with someone, they have their own love story.
In the perspective of stranger, these can be very funny or childish story.but why they fall in love?

>> In a stranger\'s perspective, this can be very funny or childish, how did they fall in love with each other?
some person started to love his/her partner because of kindness.

>> Some people started to love his/ her partner because of kindness.
Of course it can be attitude for their dream. a very simple thing like getting good score in a test can be a factor.

>> Of course, it can be an attitude to reach their dream. It\'s a very simple thing like getting a good score in a test can be a factor.
I think all of thse thins are abilities. 

>> I think all of these things are the contributing factors.
If someone have some ability which another people don\'t have, that make people more attractive.

>> If someone has the ability which another person doesn\'t have that makes people more attractive.
Sometimes, It came out from someone\'s exertion, authority, money and the charater of someone.

>> Sometimes. it came out from someone\'s exertion, authority, money and the character of the person.
For example, a man may like someone because of her temper even hot temper.

>> Did you mean; For example, a man may like someone because of her patience.
and a woman may like someone because of the simple kindness. 

>> And a woman may like someone because of her kindness.
I think they had never have such a experiences, so that make someone more attractive.

>> I think they had never have such experiences, it makes someone more attractive.
In some cases, a very simple word can make him/her very attractive.

>> In some cases, a very simple word can make him/ her very attractive.

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