About a cloud
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Jesus came on a cloud according to Danial\"s prophecy in 7:14. To whom did God give athority, glory and kingdom? To Jesus 2000 years ago. But actually Jesus was born as a baby through Mary\'s body. So the cloud mentioned in Danial is not real cloud in the sky. We can easily understand it\'s a metaphor. The cloud for Christ has two meanings. First, cloud is water, which are likened God\"s words of life in Amos 8:11-12. Jesus came to give us words of life as a true prophet. The Bible compares false prophets to clouds without rain(water) in Jude 1:12. Secondly, cloud hides the light of the sun, which are likened God\"s glory and his divine nature. In Revelation 10:1 is written that He(angel) was robed in a cloud. Therefore, cloud of Jesus means the flesh of Jesus. How about His second coming? It\'s the same as the first coming, isn\"t it? In Luke 21:27 is recorded that \"...they will see the Son of man coming on a cloud...lift up your heads because your redemption is drawing is near\"
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>>> Jesus came on a cloud, according to Danial\"s prophecy in 7:14.
To whom did God give athority, glory and kingdom? To Jesus 2000 years ago.
>>> To whom did God give authority, glory and kingdom? To Jesus 2000 years ago.
But actually Jesus was born as a baby through Mary\'s body.
>>> But Jesus was actually born as a baby through Mary\'s body.
So the cloud mentioned in Danial is not real cloud in the sky.
>>> So the cloud mentioned in Danial is not a real cloud in the sky.
We can easily understand it\'s a metaphor. The cloud for Christ has two meanings.
>>> CORRECT
First, cloud is water, which are likened God\"s words of life in Amos 8:11-12. Jesus came to give us words of life as a true prophet.
>>> First, cloud is a water, which are likened God\"s words of life in Amos 8:11-12. Jesus came to give us words of life as a true prophet.
The Bible compares false prophets to clouds without rain(water) in Jude 1:12. Secondly, cloud hides the light of the sun, which are likened God\"s glory and his divine nature.
>>> CORRECT
In Revelation 10:1 is written that He(angel) was robed in a cloud.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, cloud of Jesus means the flesh of Jesus.
>>> CORRECT
How about His second coming? It\'s the same as the first coming, isn\"t it? In Luke 21:27 is recorded that \"...they will see the Son of man coming on a cloud...lift up your heads because your redemption is drawing is near\"
>>> How about His second coming? It\'s the same as the first coming, isn\"t it? In Luke 21:27 is recorded that \"... they will see the Son of man coming in a cloud... lift up your heads because your redemption is drawing is near\"
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