about a disastrous trip or vacation.
학생이 쓴 원문
i was very lucky. whenever i traveled. one of them, i traveld to china with my parents on summer. it was hot and rainy. because it was summer. but, when we walked for the view. it stopped rain. when we rode in a car, it rained. i always have fun and excite, when i traveld. so, i have a busy day this year, but i will travel a lot next year.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa,
Thank you for having the class with me.
~~ Teacher Kathy
i was very lucky. whenever i traveled.
>> I think I\'m very lucky because I get to travel anywhere.
one of them, i traveld to china with my parents on summer. it was hot and rainy. because it was summer.
>> I went to China with my parents last summer. It was hot and raining.
but, when we walked for the view. it stopped rain.
>> When we walked to see the beautiful view, it stopped raining.
when we rode in a car, it rained.
>> But when we rode in the car, it rained again.
i always have fun and excite, when i traveld.
>> It\'s always exciting and fun experience to travel around the world.
so, i have a busy day this year, but i will travel a lot next year.
>> This year is a busy year for me, but I will travel a lot next year.
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