About a short new year's vacation
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Well, I guess you didn\'t enjoy your vacation according to
your essay. It was stressful and boring. But, anyway, at least you earned a lot of
money from your relatives. Be happy about it. kiki.
I will see you in our next class. :)
Take care :)
~~ Teacher Kris
This new year\'s day is 5 days.
>> The New New Year\'s day vacation was only 5 days.
It was too boring.
>> Correct
I don\'t like to go to my grandparent\'s house but I like get a pocket money.
>> I didn\'t like to go my grandparent\'s house but I liked the pocket money that was given to me.
I earn 32millionwon.
>> I earned 32 million Won.
I played with my younger brother.
>> Correct
It was boring too.
>> Correct
I can\'t play a smartphone game.
>> I couldn\'t play smartphone games too.
And I watch a Tv.
>> I watched TV instead.
My mom make me don\'t see a TV at night.
>> My mom didn\'t allow me to watch TV at night.
So I slept early because of my mom.
>> Correct
My youngest brother was hurt because of my younger brother.
>> Correct
We had a boring time and next day we went to my mom\'s house.
>> We had a boring time and on the next day, we went to my mom\'s house.
I like my grandmother.
>> Correct
I ate a lot of food because I was very hungry and there is a lot meat.
>> I ate a lot of food because I was very hungry and there was a lot of meat.
Next day I stay at my mom\'s home and watch TV and play catch ball.
>> On the next day, I stayed at my mom\'s house--watched TV and played catch.
It was fun.
>> Correct
And I have to do my math homework.
>> And I had to do my Math homework.
It is very stressful. I really hate math.
>> It was very stressful. I really hate Math.
I can\'t understand why do I have to do math.
>> Correct
If I solve a lot of math problem I will be so angry.
>> Correct
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