about a test
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When test comes,we worry about test. Even if that test isn't important. So I make some thories why people fell nervous when test comes. First, They don't have any self-confidence. Even if they really study hard. second. some people worry about a test and those people don't study. some people worry about the result of test. Everybody wants to be first or be better than their rivals. last some people's parents expect that their children is best and they compared with neighbors who the same as my age . We sometimes let them down through the result of test. They don't have any source of pride what we have done. That means they got something can scold us. Avoiding parents scold we should study hard than others. It calls after stress. But I like test. It makes me more improve than before.
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Hi [이름]!! You are right. The first reason why a lot of people worry about their tests is because they are not confident with their skills. So I like you to always believe in yourself and think positive. Take care!!Lei J
When test comes,we worry about test.
>>When the examination day comes, we worry about it.
Even if that test isn't important.
>>Even if that test is not that important.
So I make some thories why people fell nervous when test comes.
>>So I made some theories why people feel nervous when having a test.
First, They don't have any self-confidence.
>>First, they don't feel confident.
>>First, they lack self-confidence.
Even if they really study hard.
>>correct
second. some people worry about a test and those people don't study.
>>Secondly, some people worry about the test but they didn't study so well.
some people worry about the result of test.
>>correct
>>Some people worry too much about the test results.
Everybody wants to be first or be better than their rivals.
>>correct
last some people's parents expect that their children is best and they compared with neighbors
>>Lastly, some people's parents expect too much from them thinking that their children are the best among others.
We sometimes let them down through the result of test.
>>correct
They don't have any source of pride what we have done.
>>They lost their source of pride because of what we have done.
That means they got something can scold us.
>>That means they got something that they can scold us.
Avoiding parents scold we should study hard than others.
>>We should study hard in order for us to avoid our parents to scold at us.
It calls after stress.
>>It results having stress.
But I like test.
>>But I like taking tests.
It makes me more improve than before.
>>It helps me to improve.
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