About Abraham Lincoln

Abraham Lincoln who is one of the best presidents of US was born in poor house. His father was a man who had never been to school. Also Abraham was not able to go to school very often, but he read more than 100 books. When he became an adult he leaves his family and try to learn about the world. He was very good man so he was able to become the governer of the states. And soon he was able to become the president of the US. Few days later the American Civil war was broke and he fought for the Nothern US. Finally he won the war and ended the slavery. But people from south didn't like him and they made a plan to kill Lincoln. As a result he dead when he was watching the opera. One of the best presidents of US died.

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