about absence

Hello, teacher, Karen~! I`m sorry.. I was absence in 7/3 beacause my student`s mother came to an academy suddenyㅠㅠ.. she was verry angry beacause her son..and she talked to about her son with me. I feel sad.. thank you for your letter. see you next time~

Hi there again Ms.Joy! Thanks for sending your composition. It\'s good to know that you are safe, but too bad, there was a problem in the academy. I hope you already fixed the problem. ^^ I checked your sentences so please read them, okay? If you have any questions about it, please just ask me and I will help you. If there is anything that you want to tell me, feel free to do so ^^ Enjoy your Tuesday evening! Take care!  ~t.Karen (.-___-) Hello, teacher, Karen~! >> Correct sentence: Hello teacher Karen!   >> **Correct grammar but check your punctuation mark. Do not put a comma [ , ]after \'\'hello\'\'.  >> **Only use one punctuation mark to end your sentence, so remove the \'\' ~ \'\' sign.  I`m sorry.. >> Correct sentence: I\'m sorry.   >> ** Correct grammar but check your punctuation mark. Only use one punctuation mark to end your sentence, so remove the extra period [ . ].  I was absence in 7/3 beacause my student`s mother came to an academy suddenyㅠㅠ.. >> Correct sentence: I was absent TODAY because my student\'s mother came to THE academy SUDDENLY. >> **Use the word \'\'Absent\'\', it is a verb (dongsa). The word \'\'Abesence\'\' is a noun (myeongsa). Examples: a. James was absent yesterday.  b. James\' absence made me sad. ---- >> **Be careful with your spelling; \'\'because\'\' and \'\'suddenly\'\'.   >> ** Use the article \'\'The\'\' because you are talking about a specific academy. The academy that you are working in. Example: a. the amusement park --- A specific amusement park (like Lotte World or Everland).  b. an amusement park --- Any amusement park which is not specific.  >> **Only use one punctuation mark to end your sentence, so remove the extra period [ . ].  she was verry angry beacause her son..and she talked to about her son with me. >> Correct sentence: She was VERY angry BECAUSE OF her son and she talked to me about her son. >> **Capitalize (big letter) the first letter of your sentence.  Example: a. James is going to watch a movie. b. There is a spider in the bathroom.  >> ** Use the preposition \'\'OF\'\' to indicate the cause or reason. Examples: a. The man became disappointed because OF the dirty street. b. Denis is sad because OF the unexpected news that he heard.  c. Amanda is happy because OF her father\'s promotion. >> **Be careful with your spelling; \'\'because\'\' and \'\'very\'\'. I feel sad.. >> Correct sentence: I feel sad.   >> ** Correct grammar but check your punctuation mark. Only use one punctuation mark to end your sentence, so remove the extra period [ . ].  thank you for your letter. >> Correct sentence: Thank you for your letter.   >> **Correct grammar but capitalize (big letter) the first letter of your sentence.  Example: a. James is going to watch a movie. b. There is a spider in the bathroom.  see you next time~ >> Correct sentence: See you next time.   >> **Correct grammar but capitalize (big letter) the first letter of your sentence.  Example: a. James is going to watch a movie. b. There is a spider in the bathroom.  >> ** End your sentence with a proper punctuation mark, you can choose among the following: period [ . ], question mark [ ? ] or an exclamation point [ ! ]. Example; a. Thank you very much, Ms.Joy.  b. Watch out!  c. Where is Andy?