About art.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like art but I don't know how to interpret and enjoy art. So I don't have enough chance to go museum. Because I afraid to go museum. I like all kinds of art but especially I like Korea fusion art like a watercolor. It feels warm but cool, comforable but tesion. When I watch the art, I have various feeling.
To teacher.
Hello. I really happy to write a letter to you. Now, I have class at 8 o'clock in college. So I have to change this class. But the manager said that if I change the time of lecture, I cann't meet you more. I was very sad but I don't have choice. At first lecture, I was very nervous and unconfident when I speak in English. But I can speak loudly in front of people. Because you helped me a lot. And you tell me your story freindly. I really appreciate it. I'll miss you. And I'll miss your voice 'How are you, So hee?'. Thank you all of it. Have nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hi So Hee,
I would be sad if I will not see you anymore. You give me the energy to teach. But, I guess it is for the best you know. I will never forget the time we had together. I will also miss you. I am happy that you enjoyed listening to my stories. I am happy to know that you learned something from me. Thank you for believing in me and I am happy that you were able to feel cionfident because of me. Keep it up! Until we meet again! ^^ See you!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
I like art but I don\'t know how to interpret and enjoy art.
>>Correct!
So I don\'t have enough chance to go museum.
>>I was not given a chance to go to the museum.
Because I afraid to go museum.
>>Because I am afraid to go to the museum.
I like all kinds of art but especially I like Korea fusion art like a watercolor.
>>I like all kinds of art especially the Korean Fusion Art. It's like watercolor art.
It feels warm but cool, comforable but tesion.
>>It feels warm but cool, comfortable but with tension.
When I watch the art, I have various feeling.>>When I see art, I feel various emotions.To teacher.>>Correct!Hello. I really happy to write a letter to you.
>>Hello! I am really happy to write you a letter.
Now, I have class at 8 o\'clock in college.
>>I have a class at 8 o'clock in the college.
So I have to change this class.
>>So I have to change the time of this class.
But the manager said that if I change the time of lecture, I cann\'t meet you more.
>>OK.
>>But the manager said that if I change my time, you will not be my teacher anymore.
I was very sad but I don\'t have choice.
>>I was very sad but I didn't have a choice.
At first lecture, I was very nervous and unconfident when I speak in English.
>>At first, I was very nervous and not confident when speaking English.
But I can speak loudly in front of people.
>>But now I can speak loudly in front of people.
Because you helped me a lot.
>>Correct!
And you tell me your story freindly.
>>And you tell me a lot of friendly stories.
I really appreciate it.
>>Correct!
I\'ll miss you.
>>Correct!
And I\'ll miss your voice \'How are you, So hee?\'.
>>Correct!
Thank you all of it. Have nice day.
>>Thank you for all of it. Have a nice day!
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