About art.

2012-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I like art but I don't know how to interpret and enjoy art. So I don't have enough chance to go museum. Because I afraid to go museum. I like all kinds of art but especially I like Korea fusion art like a watercolor. It feels warm but cool, comforable but tesion. When I watch the art, I have various feeling. To teacher. Hello. I really happy to write a letter to you. Now, I have class at 8 o'clock in college. So I have to change this class. But the manager said that if I change the time of lecture, I cann't meet you more. I was very sad but I don't have choice. At first lecture, I was very nervous and unconfident when I speak in English. But I can speak loudly in front of people. Because you helped me a lot. And you tell me your story freindly. I really appreciate it. I'll miss you. And I'll miss your voice 'How are you, So hee?'. Thank you all of it. Have nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hi So Hee, I would be sad if I will not see you anymore. You give me the energy to teach. But, I guess it is for the best you know. I will never forget the time we had together. I will also miss you. I am happy that you enjoyed listening to my stories. I am happy to know that you learned something from me. Thank you for believing in me and I am happy that you were able to feel cionfident because of me. Keep it up! Until we meet again! ^^ See you! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: I like art but I don\'t know how to interpret and enjoy art. >>Correct! So I don\'t have enough chance to go museum. >>I was not given a chance to go to the museum. Because I afraid to go museum. >>Because I am afraid to go to the museum. I like all kinds of art but especially I like Korea fusion art like a watercolor. >>I like all kinds of art especially the Korean Fusion Art. It's like watercolor art. It feels warm but cool, comforable but tesion. >>It feels warm but cool, comfortable but with tension. When I watch the art, I have various feeling.>>When I see art, I feel various emotions.To teacher.>>Correct!Hello. I really happy to write a letter to you. >>Hello! I am really happy to write you a letter. Now, I have class at 8 o\'clock in college. >>I have a class at 8 o'clock in the college. So I have to change this class. >>So I have to change the time of this class. But the manager said that if I change the time of lecture, I cann\'t meet you more. >>OK. >>But the manager said that if I change my time, you will not be my teacher anymore. I was very sad but I don\'t have choice. >>I was very sad but I didn't have a choice. At first lecture, I was very nervous and unconfident when I speak in English. >>At first, I was very nervous and not confident when speaking English. But I can speak loudly in front of people. >>But now I can speak loudly in front of people. Because you helped me a lot. >>Correct! And you tell me your story freindly. >>And you tell me a lot of friendly stories. I really appreciate it. >>Correct! I\'ll miss you. >>Correct! And I\'ll miss your voice \'How are you, So hee?\'. >>Correct! Thank you all of it. Have nice day. >>Thank you for all of it. Have a nice day!

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