about butter cookies.

2014-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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THe butter cookies that I told you is very delicious. It tastes like Butter ring snack in korea. But I have to eat less cookies for diet. Because I'm fat now and I must thin and tall. commitee cccassion persistant succesful accomodate. agressive emberrass necessery arguement bizzare

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hi there again TOM! Thanks for being so active and a wonderful student. I like your essay. ^^ It is good that you are also doing your best to improve your writing skill. When you showed it to me in class, I felt hungry. Hahaha! I do understand, you just have to limit it. I am sure that you are conscious about your health. Take a lot of rest this weekend. Can\'t wait to talk to you on Monday. Teacher Nina   THe butter cookies that I told you is very delicious. >> The butter cookies that I told you are very delicious. >> OR: The butter cookies that I mentioned in class are very tasty. It tastes like Butter ring snack in korea. >> It tastes like Butter, it is a snack in Korea. >> OR: It is a snack in Korea, tastes like a butter and shaped like a ring.But I have to eat less cookies for diet. >> But I have to eat less cookies for my diet. Because I\'m fat now and I must thin and tall. >> Because I\'m fat now, I must be thin and tall.

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