about butter cookies.
학생이 쓴 원문
THe butter cookies that I told you is very delicious.
It tastes like Butter ring snack in korea.
But I have to eat less cookies for diet.
Because I'm fat now and I must thin and tall.
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강사 첨삭
hi there again TOM!
Thanks for being so active and a wonderful student.
I like your essay. ^^ It is good that you are also doing your best to improve your writing skill.
When you showed it to me in class, I felt hungry. Hahaha!
I do understand, you just have to limit it.
I am sure that you are conscious about your health.
Take a lot of rest this weekend. Can\'t wait to talk to you on Monday.
Teacher Nina
THe butter cookies that I told you is very delicious.
>> The butter cookies that I told you are very delicious.
>> OR: The butter cookies that I mentioned in class are very tasty. It tastes like Butter ring snack in korea.
>> It tastes like Butter, it is a snack in Korea.
>> OR: It is a snack in Korea, tastes like a butter and shaped like a ring.But I have to eat less cookies for diet.
>> But I have to eat less cookies for my diet. Because I\'m fat now and I must thin and tall.
>> Because I\'m fat now, I must be thin and tall.
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