About Chuseok

2010-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

학생이 쓴 원문

chuseok is a great holiday of Korea. it's like the American Thanks giving holidays. We wear korean clothes Those are called "Han - Bok". but now, usually we didn't wear Han - Bok. On Chusok we thank our ancestors. and we buy a lot of traditional food. but, in the fast(20 century), we make those with hand. didn't buy. For example, Songpyun! Songpyun is one main food we prepare on Chuseok. Chuseok is like half moon. but, I don't know very well how to make Songpyon.

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Subin,

You are verrry gooooooodddd on your diary today. You have written a lot more. Great job!!^^ I ask you to do it as often as you could, ok?

 Happy Holidays!!!

--jade--

chuseok is a great holiday of Korea.

>>봀husok

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