About computers controlling the house.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want the computer to control my house yet. Because I am living comfortably enough even now. I don\'t want to try it because I think I\'ll want more and more if I\'m more comfortable here. But I may change my mind later. Because the world may have changed then.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don\'t want the computer to control my house yet.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I am living comfortably enough even now.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t want to try it because I think I\'ll want more and more if I\'m more comfortable here.
>>> I don\'t want to try it because I think I\'ll want more and more if I get comfortable with it.
But I may change my mind later. Because the world may have changed then.
>>> But I may change my mind in the future because the world may have changed then.
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