about COVID-19
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It is already quite faded for me because it has taken for more than 4 years now. Probably, I couldn’t realized COVID-19’s magnitude of the problem that time. I just thought it was one of kinds of bad flu. I agree about how the government put important about tracking. Since public recording is really helpful for arouse people’s attention. However, if they only focus on prevention, it will be a huge intrusion issue. So, after passed the first step of seriousness’s alerting, we should more attend to treatment and prevent recurrence as social rules.
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Hi Sharon! Thank you for sharing your thoughts regarding this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
It is already quite faded for me because it has taken for more than 4 years now.
>>> It is quite fuzzy for me already since it has been four years already.
Probably, I couldn’t realized COVID-19’s magnitude of the problem that time.
>>> At that time, I couldn\'t have realized the magnitude of COVID-19.
I just thought it was one of kinds of bad flu.
>>> I just thought it was one kind of a bad flu.
I agree about how the government put important about tracking.
>>> I supported how the government prioritized the tracking system.
Since public recording is really helpful for arouse people’s attention.
>>> This kind of public recording helped get the people\'s attention.
However, if they only focus on prevention, it will be a huge intrusion issue.
>>> However, if they only focused on prevention, it would have been a huge intrusion issue.
So, after passed the first step of seriousness’s alerting, we should more attend to treatment and prevent recurrence as social rules.
>>> So after the first step of alerting people, we have dealt with the treatment and prevention.
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