About diet 2

2019-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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...eating nothing. So I struggled with eating habit, then I tried another diet which had been so popular in worldwide, called \'Low-carb and High fat\' (also called \'Ketogenic\' diet) but it failed again. I had to cut down of carbohydrate but unfortunately I\'m addicted to milk(whole milk) which contains a lot of lactose.( a kind of milk sugar, also a kind of carbohydrate). So I ended up eating a lot of fat and a lot of lactose(carb) and this kind of diet was not for me. And now, I have been on this diet for a long time. Time limited diet. I eat proper meal only until 3 or 4 in the afternoon, then I don\'t eat any meat and flour/ rice at all. If I want to eat or drink something after 3 or 4, I only drink coffee, milk(yeah I know milk doesn\'t help but I\'m addicted to milk so I need a little sometimes.), and fruits or vegetables. And I found this type of time limit diet is the easiest way of diet for me. ....

강사 첨삭

Oh...so this is the continuation! ^ ^ Very well done homework. Thank you for sharing!  ^^
-Teacher Jedah

So I struggled with eating habit, then I tried another diet which had been so popular in worldwide, called \'Low-carb and High fat\' (also called \'Ketogenic\' diet) but it failed again. 
>>So I struggled with eating my habits, then I tried another diet which was so popular worldwide, it\'s called the \'Low-carb and High fat\' (also called \'Ketogenic\' diet) but it failed me again. 
I had to cut down of carbohydrate but unfortunately I\'m addicted to milk(whole milk) which contains a lot of lactose.( a kind of milk sugar, also a kind of carbohydrate). 
>>I had to cut down on carbohydrates but unfortunately I\'m addicted to milk(whole milk) which contains a lot of lactose.( a kind of milk sugar, also a kind of carbohydrate). 
So I ended up eating a lot of fat and a lot of lactose(carb) and this kind of diet was not for me. 
>>CORRECT
And now, I have been on this diet for a long time. 
>>CORRECT
Time limited diet. 
>>CORRECT
I eat proper meal only until 3 or 4 in the afternoon, then I don\'t eat any meat and flour/ rice at all. 
>>CORRECT
If I want to eat or drink something after 3 or 4, I only drink coffee, milk(yeah I know milk doesn\'t help but I\'m addicted to milk so I need a little sometimes.), and fruits or vegetables.
>>CORRECT
And I found this type of time limit diet is the easiest way of diet for me. ....
>>CORRECT

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