About dying
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there sir [이름]!
You were lucky to be given a second chance in life. Many people aren\'t so lucky.
I often say to my sisters and my friends that I\'m not afraid of dying. I told them I could go anytime because unlike them, I don\'t have children to think about. Even if I leave early, it\'s okay. But I don\'t know. Maybe, when my time comes, I\'ll be begging God to extend my life at the last minute. (LOL)
Take care!
~T. Lynn
All men must die. Death is a human\'s fate. It is inevitable.
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Socrates say that death may be the greatest of all human blessings.
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I will die someday in the future, too.
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I had operated stomach cancer six years ago.
>> I had an operation for stomach cancer six years ago.
I was third phase of stomach cancer.
>> I had the third stage of stomach cancer.
At that time, I thought a lot about the death.
>> At that time, I thought a lot about death.
OR>> At that time, I thought a lot about dying.
What is a death? Why should human do die?
>> What is death? Why should humans die?
At Coming back home in the hospital, I said to my wife \"you should live well with our sons\"
>> Upon coming back home from the hospital, I said to my wife, You should live well with our sons.\"
My wife cried bitterly. I was sad too.
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But the operation was completed successfully.
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OR>> But the operation was successful.
I was completely cured of medical treatment.
>> I was completely cured from cancer due to the medical treatment.
I am living normally.
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OR>> I am now living normally.
I felt empirically that death is neither a blessing nor a fear.
>> I felt empirically that death is neither a blessing nor to be feared.
After the critical moment, I am trying to live hard.
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OR>> After the most critical moment of my life, I am trying to live the best I can.
Death is only a process that we needs to go through.
>> Death is only a process that we need to go through.
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