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I have some problems between the company where I worked for.
It's difficult to negociate and talked with them. I sometimes got lost the way they spoke. So I decided to send e_mail.
Just check my sentences and If there are wrong or inappropriate please change good way.
I want to ask something about my pension.
I got my check through texation Services. But I wondered the way how to calculate. Actually I left in Austrailia before I get my last payslip. But I can calculate my amount of pansion. How do you calculate my pansion? Just let me know your way. I really wondered.
I also knew some kind of commision fee. Actually I don't know your standard of accounting. If you have any questions, plese tell me what ever you want. Excepting a response to this letter.
thanks..
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Hi [이름]!
I hope that your problem will be resolved as soon as possible. Anyway, please go over the corrections for you to reconstruct your composition to a better one. I hope this helps. Take care!
-T. Lei
I have some problems between the company where I worked for.
>> I’m having some problems regarding with the company I worked for.It's difficult to negociate and talked with them.
>> It’s difficult to talk and to negotiate with them.
I sometimes got lost the way they spoke. So I decided to send e_mail.
>> I sometimes do not understand the things they say because of the way they speak, so I just decided to send an e-mail instead.Just check my sentences and If there are wrong or inappropriate please change good way.
>> Please check my sentences and please help me by correcting them.I want to ask something about my pension.
>> Correct.I got my check through texation Services.
>> I got my check through taxation services.
But I wondered the way how to calculate.
>> However, I’m wondering how you calculated it.
Actually I left in Austrailia before I get my last payslip.
>> Actually, I left Australia before I got my last pay slip.
But I can calculate my amount of pansion. How do you calculate my pansion? Just let me know your way. I really wondered.
>> I can calculate my pension by myself but I would also like to know how you calculated it because I am really confused. I hope you can let me know. I also knew some kind of commision fee.
>> Also, I knew that there is some kind of commission fee.
Actually I don't know your standard of accounting.
>> Honestly, I don’t know your standard of accounting.
If you have any questions, plese tell me what ever you want.
>> If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
Excepting a response to this letter.
>> I am expecting your most favorable response regarding this matter.thanks..
>> Thank you very much!
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