About education.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
I agree sir. Learning is a lifelong process. You learn new things everyday and you can add to your knowledge no matter your age. Good job on your homework! See you in class tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Every country has the compulsory education.
>> correct!
In Korea, compulsory schooling is nine years.
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Currently, Korean students get free education for nine years-six years of elementary school and three years of middle school education.
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Students enter higher schools according to the individual\'s economic and academic capacity.
>> Students enter high school according to the individual\'s economic and academic capacity.
Almost all students entering higher school.
>> Almost all students enter higher education.
South Korea\'s college admission ratio is over 70 percent.
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The growing numbers of highly educated young men who are unemployed is a big social problem.
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Anyway, South Korea\'s education fever is very high.
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But it is over after graduating from college.
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Now, that is a lifelong learning age.
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I am planning to go to doctoral program.
>> I am planning to obtain my doctoral degree.
I want to study folklore.
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I think learning is endless.
>> correct!
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