About Fake News
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a lot of people who take care of comments of news in Korea. Because of the reason, the internet news on website hasn\'t been running comments function any longer. One day, there was a huge issue that one of famous idol singers took a picture and uploaded it on SNS with her body naked. It was a true news, but the point was bad comments which was fake. It seems to me that people enjoying making another rumor based on the news and spreading it as if it was real. It might be easy way to be spotlighted for themselves. Eventually, She has suicided herself suffering from the bad comments, and rumors. When I heard this issue for the first time, I was surprisingly shocked and getting sad about the fact that we\'ve lost very talented woman in Korea. I was really sorry to her that this situation was happened. I\'m not a person who do this sort of bad things but I could be one of them somehow. We\'ve sent a few men to heaven with similar reason.No one should make any fake news for just fun.
강사 첨삭
1. There are a lot of people who take care of comments of news in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>There are a lot of people who are concern of comments of news in Korea.
2. Because of the reason, the internet news on website hasn\'t been running comments function any longer.
>>Because of this reason, the internet news hasn\'t been running comments function any longer.
3. One day, there was a huge issue that one of famous idol singers took a picture and uploaded it on SNS with her body naked.
>>One day, there was a huge issue that one of the famous idol singers took a picture and uploaded it on SNS with her body naked.
4. It was a true news, but the point was bad comments which was fake.
>>It was a real news but, the point was bad comments which were fake.
5. It seems to me that people enjoying making another rumor based on the news and spreading it as if it was real.
>>It seems to me that people are enjoying making another rumor based on the news and spreading it as if it was real.
6. It might be easy way to be spotlighted for themselves.
>>It might be an easy way to be spotlighted for themselves.
7. Eventually, She has suicided herself suffering from the bad comments, and rumors.
>>Eventually, she committed suicide suffering from the bad comments and rumors.
8. When I heard this issue for the first time, I was surprisingly shocked and getting sad about the fact that we\'ve lost very talented woman in Korea.
>>When I heard this issue for the first time, I was surprisingly shocked and getting sad about the fact that we\'ve lost a very talented woman in Korea.
9. I was really sorry to her that this situation was happened.
>>I was really sorry for what happened to her.
10. I\'m not a person who do this sort of bad things but I could be one of them somehow.
>>I\'m not a person who do this sort of bad thing but I could be one of them somehow.
11. We\'ve sent a few men to heaven with similar reason.
>>We\'ve sent a few men to heaven with the similar reason.
12.No one should make any fake news for just fun.
>>CORRECT
OR>>No one should make any fake news just for fun.
Very good sentences.
- T.Melody^^
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