About favorite music

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. This is actually interesting and it makes me curious, curious about heir music. We like a certain kind of music because we can relate to it or it gives us a unique feeling. 

- T. Beth

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My favorite music is My Bloody Valentine’s songs.

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>>>> OR: I\'m into My Bloody Valentine\'s songs.        

They are usually called ‘Shoegazing band’ or ‘Noising band’. Since they gaze at their shoes while playing music.

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>>>> They are usually called ‘Shoegazing band’ or ‘Noising band’ for the reason that they gaze at their shoes while playing music.       

That means they don’t care about the audience and only concentrate on their music.

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I have liked that band since I heard their songs in Sopia Coppola directer’s movie.

>>>>  I have liked that band since I\'ve heard their songs in director Sofia Coppola’s movie.

>>>> OR: I have liked that band since I\'ve heard their songs in Sofia Coppola’s directed movie.      

She often use their songs in her movie.

>>>> She often uses their songs in her movies.       

I think her movie fit with their songs well.

>>>> OR: I think her movie genre fits with their songs well.      
They have came to Seoul for performing but I could’t go their concert.

>>>>  They have come to Seoul to perform but I could’t go to their concert.

>>>> OR:  They came to Seoul to perform but I could’t go to their concert.      

So This summer, I went to rock festival which they appear.

>>>>  So This summer, I went to a rock festival where they made an appearance.      

That was very fascinating moment.

>>>> That was a very fascinating moment.       

The music was so loud, so people have to put on the ear plug.

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But many peple didn’t put on that.

>>>> But still many people did not put them on.      

Although the music was so loud, that was so beautiful to them.

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