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Hi wendy
Today's topic was so interesting for us.
I think most people like to eat a great meal at the great restarant.
When I lived in Germany, my husband and I used to go the other country's restaurant like India, Tibet, Afganistan, Mexico and Italian.
But we never go to Korean restaurant.
Because it was not same with our own traditional taste.
I think it's changing more not spicy, more not well salted for European style.
Anyway, the most dilicious food I have eatten is Tibetan food.
That's really great.
So if there is a Tivetan restaurant, just try it!
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Hi [이름],I agree with you because I really love cooking.Have a good night!
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Hi wendy
>>CORRECTToday's topic was so interesting for us.
>>CORRCTI think most people like to eat a great meal at the great restarant.
>>I think most people likes eating great meals in a restaurant.When I lived in Germany, my husband and I used to go the other country's restaurant like India, Tibet, Afganistan, Mexico and Italian.
>>When we were in Germany,my husband and I used to go to other country뭩 restaurants.But we never go to Korean restaurant.
>>CORRECTBecause it was not same with our own traditional taste.
>>CORRECT I think it's changing more not spicy, more not well salted for European style.
>>I think it was change because it뭩 not too spicy and lesser salt like European style.Anyway, the most dilicious food I have eatten is Tibetan food.
>>Anyway,the most delicious food I have ever eaten was Tibetan food.That's really great.
>>CORRECTSo if there is a Tibetan restaurant, just try it!
>>CORRECT
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