About Gift vouchers
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No. I don\'t think gift vouchers are a good idea. This is because gift voichers can be used anywhere, and cash can be used anywhere. I don\'t like to receive them. Cash is more efficient than gift vouchers.
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Thank you for the composition.
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~ Teacher Tricia
No. I don\'t think gift vouchers are a good idea.
>>> CORRECT!
This is because gift voichers can be used anywhere, and cash can be used anywhere.
>>> This is because gift vouchers can be used anywhere, and cash can be used anywhere as well.
I don\'t like to receive them.
>>> CORRECT!
Cash is more efficient than gift vouchers.
>>> CORRECT!
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