about Go- Stop..
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, jaimme. the day is nearly over.
for thisweekemd, korea will be effected by typhoon.
as you know, last week typhoon was striked to korea.
unlikely, we have to undergo in this time...ㅜㅜ
to change the point,
today morning, we have told about Gamble.
Ok. I'll let you know about Go-Stop.
At first, Go-Stop has orginated Japan card playing.
After it is transfered to korea, it's feature changed over time.
even if some of people do Go-Stop by Gamble, most of people have used it just fun with freind and relative.
So hope to be useful this message understanding Go-Stop.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for the composition. So have you tried to play Go-stop before? By the way, you should take care in case the next typhoon will be as strong as the previous one. See you later!
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi, jaimme. the day is nearly over.
>>Hi Jammie! The day is nearly over.
for thisweekemd, korea will be effected by typhoon.
>>This weekend, Korea will be affected by a typhoon.
as you know, last week typhoon was striked to korea.
>>As you know, Korea was hit by another typhoon last week.
unlikely, we have to undergo in this time...ㅜㅜ
>>Unfortunately, another typhoon is on the way.
to change the point,
>>By the way,
today morning, we have told about Gamble.
>>This morning, we were told about gambling.
Ok. I'll let you know about Go-Stop.
>>Correct!
At first, Go-Stop has orginated Japan card playing.
>>Go-Stop is originally a card game in Japan.
After it is transfered to korea, it's feature changed over time.
>>When it was introduced in Korea, it's feature changed over time.
even if some of people do Go-Stop by Gamble, most of people have used it just fun with freind and relative.
>>Even if some people play Go-stop as a means of gambling, other people paly it for fun with their friends or relatives.
So hope to be useful this message understanding Go-Stop.
>>I hope this message helped you understand Go-stop.
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