about happy^^

2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

Every evening, l'm happy. Because I can sleep in my bed. Also I'm more happy on weekend. I will a restful nap. Monday to friday I have to get up six o'clock. And mostly I fell a sleep at one o'clock in the dawn. Also quitting time is occured traffic jam. So I feel tired. For that reason I feel tired. Sleep make energy. And I'm very happy to eat my mom's food. mom's food give to me the power.

강사 첨삭


Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
I am glad since you can practice making more sentences in English.
Keep on doing this to improve your English ability.
Please go over the corrections.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Every evening, l\'m happy.
>> Correct!
OR>> I\'m happy every night.
Because I can sleep in my bed.
>>
Because I can sleep on my bed.
Also I\'m more happy on weekend.
>> I am happier on weekends.
I will a restful nap.
>> I will have a restful nap.
Monday to friday I have to get up six o\'clock.
>> From Monday to Friday, I have to get up at 6 o\'clock.
And mostly I fell a sleep at one o\'clock in the dawn.
>>
And mostly, I fall asleep at one o\'clock in the dawn.
Also quitting time is occured traffic jam.
>> Do you mean:  Also, after work, there is a traffic jam.
So I feel tired.
>> Correct!
For that reason I feel tired.

>> Correct!
Sleep make energy.
>> Sleep gives energy.
And I\'m very happy to eat my mom\'s food.

>> Correct!
OR>>
And I\'m very happy to eat the food my mom cooked.
mom\'s food give to me the power.
>> Mom\'s food always gives me power.

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