About health care system

Q1. What do you think about the health care system in your country? Ans #1. I think that health care system is good. Because, It makes cheap a fee for consultation. So, I have scaling annually at dental hospital. But if I don't have health care system, I have scaling once 2 or 3years. Consequently, I think that health care system in my country is excellent. Q2. How could it be improved? Ans #2. I think that government using taxes is changed to better way for our country and next ages. and our country's econmy is developed more. To do this, our country must chellenge on the world econmy. But, I think that our country have a long way to go.

Good morning [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort. ^_^ Please go over the sentences. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Q1. What do you think about the health care system in your country? Ans #1. I think that health care system is good. >> I think that the health care system is good. Because, It makes cheap a fee for consultation. >> Because, it provides cheaper consultation fee. So, I have scaling annually at dental hospital. >> So, I have scaling annually at a dental hospital. But if I don\'t have health care system, I have scaling once 2 or 3years. >> But if I don\'t have a health care insurance, I would have scaling once in 2 or 3 years. Consequently, I think that health care system in my country is excellent.>> Consequently, I think that the health care system in my country is excellent.Q2. How could it be improved?Ans #2. I think that government using taxes is changed to better way for our country and next ages. and our country\'s econmy is developed more. >> Do you mean: I think that the government  using taxes should be changed to a better way for our country\'s people and for our economy to develop more. To do this, our country must chellenge on the world econmy. >> Do you mean:  To do this, our country must be challenged by the world \'s economy. But, I think that our country have a long way to go. >> But, I think that our country has a long way to go.