About heroes
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Charry. ^^
At last of weekend night, I write about my home work issue.
Well... In my view many Heroes lives in the world
It means heroes close to me and you.
Sometimes Hollywood action star will be hero like a superman.
And the other case a historical character like nightingale.
In mt case, hero is my parents.
I have a lot of think about hero to me.
I know many famous person.
But no matter what the important thing in the world of history,
first things first, existence of mine.
So my hero is my parents who made me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
How are you doing today?
We were not able to have a class this morning. I hope you\'re alright.
Thank you very much for doing your homework!
I think heroes in real life don\'t really wear a mask, a cape and outrageous outfits.
Most of the time, they\'re just ordinary people doing extraordinary things.
We are surrounded by them everyday.
But unlike in the movies, the real life heroes are also normal people who are capable of making bad decisions and committing errors.
In my opinion, there is a hero in each and everyone of us.
It\'s just a matter of letting it out when the moment or time calls for it.
We can be heroes in our own little ways.
A nurse who revives a patient is a hero.
A fireman who puts out the fire and makes sure that no one gets hurt from it is a hero.
A policeman who ensures the safety of the people it serves is a hero.
A social worker who makes sure that domestic violence is controlled is a hero.
A hard working father or mother is a hero in his or her child/children\'s eyes.
We are indeed surrounded by heroes and we meet them and deal with them everyday.
Anyhow, that\'s my view regarding this matter.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again on Tuesday.
~Teacher Charry ^^
Hello. Charry. ^^
>> Hello, Charry. ^^
At last of weekend night, I write about my home work issue.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I\'ve answered the essay question in my homework on a Sunday night.Well... In my view many Heroes lives in the world
>> Well, in my view many heroes live in the world.
OR >> In my point-of-view, many heroes exist in this world.It means heroes close to me and you. >> It means heroes are just close to me and you. Sometimes Hollywood action star will be hero like a superman.
>> Sometimes Hollywood action stars are considered as heroes. An example would be Superman.And the other case a historical character like nightingale.
>> And in other cases a historical character like Nightingale is also considered a hero.In mt case, hero is my parents.
>> In my case, my heroes are my parents.
OR >> In my case, my parents are my heroes.I have a lot of think about hero to me.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I have to think a lot about who my hero really is.I know many famous person.
>> I know many famous persons/people.But no matter what the important thing in the world of history, first things first, existence of mine.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: But even though there are a lot of important people and things in the world of history, I still think my existence is more important.So my hero is my parents who made me.
>> That\'s why I consider my parents, who made me, as my heroes.
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