About household chores
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When we live in a house, we have to do household chores to keep living.
>>Correct!
However, almost parents do all of household chores.
>>However, almost all parents do all of the household chores.
When children do household chores, the give them some pocket money.
>>When children do some household chores, parents give them some pocket money.
I think it is not good.
>>Correct!
Sometimes, it is okay but we get some pocketmoney everytime they do household chores.
>>Sometimes it is okay, but it is not okay when children recieve some pocket money every time they work at home.
Because they are one of family members.
>>Because they are one of the family members.
So, It is natural to do some household chores.
>>So it is normal to do some household chores.
Also, I think that sometime we have to help our parents.
>>I also think that sometimes we have to help our parents.
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