About how important science is.
학생이 쓴 원문
Science is very important. Because there is nothing in human life that is not science. Everything is driven by science. I always trust science. There are times in life when some really strange phenomena occur, which can be explained by science. Without science, there is no progress.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Science is very important.
>>> CORRECT!
Because there is nothing in human life that is not science.
>>> CORRECT!
Everything is driven by science.
>>> CORRECT!
I always trust science.
>>> I have always trusted science.
There are times in life when some really strange phenomena occur, which can be explained by science.
>>> CORRECT!
Without science, there is no progress.
>>> CORRECT!
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