About how much did you spend on presents last year?
학생이 쓴 원문
I spent a million won last year for my parents.
I take care of my parents\' birthdays every year.
I spent 100,000 won every year, but this year I spent a lot of money because I have money by interning.
I gave it to my mom with money, and my dad a Bluetooth speaker as a gift
The reason I gave money to my mom is that she can buy freely.
The reason why I gave my dad a Bluetooth speaker is that he usually enjoys listening to music
So I bought it after thinking about it for a week.
강사 첨삭
I spent a million won last year for my parents.
>> CORRECT
I take care of my parents\' birthdays every year.
>> CORRECT
I spent 100,000 won every year, but this year I spent a lot of money because I have money by interning.
>> I spend 100,000 won every year, but this year I spent a lot of money because I had money from interning.
I gave it to my mom with money, and my dad a Bluetooth speaker as a gift
>> I gave my mom money, and I gave my dad a Bluetooth speaker as a gift.
The reason I gave money to my mom is that she can buy freely.
>> The reason I gave money to my mom is so that she can buy what she wants freely.
The reason why I gave my dad a Bluetooth speaker is that he usually enjoys listening to music
>> The reason why I gave my dad a Bluetooth speaker is because he usually enjoys listening to music
So I bought it after thinking about it for a week.
>> CORRECT
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