About in Vietnam
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
Massage is the best experience. Because massage service is very chip and it feels so good.
And worst is that hot and humid weathers. When I take a walk to eat food, my clothes was wet my sweat. But except weathers, I\'m sure that Vietnam is very good country.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ho! I enjoyed reading your homework today because it was detailed. You described the country really well.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
Massage is the best experience.
>>The massage is the best experience.
Because massage service is very chip and it feels so good.
>>Because the massage service is very cheap and it feels so good.
And worst is that hot and humid weathers.
>>And the worst is the hot and humid weather.
When I take a walk to eat food, my clothes was wet my sweat.
>>When I take a walk to eat food, my clothes were wet from my sweat.
But except weathers, I\'m sure that Vietnam is very good country.
>>But except weathers, I\'m sure that Vietnam is a very good country.
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