About Korea society
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Do you enjoy socializing with foreigners? Why so?
I don\'t enjoy socializing with foreigners in korea.
Because, it\'s hard to get the new opportunity.
Maybe, it\'s problem of our thinking.
Korean and foreigners are same in korea.
Korean don\'t like and to do difficult of the foreigners.
They like the homogenerous. andthen,
korea\'s society is homogenerous society.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I don\'t enjoy socializing with foreigners in Korea.
>>> correct
Because, it\'s hard to get the new opportunity.
Because, it\'s hard to get the new opportunity.
>>> That\'s because it\'s hard to get a new opportunity.
Maybe, it\'s problem of our thinking.
>>> Maybe, it\'s a problem of our thinking.
Korean and foreigners are same in korea.
>>> Koreans and foreigners are the same in Korea.
Korean don\'t like and to do difficult of the foreigners.
>>> Koreans don\'t like foreigners and think they are difficult to deal with.
They like the homogenerous. andthen, korea\'s society is homogenerous society.
>>> They like the homogeneous society and Korea has always been a homogeneous society.
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