About KOREAN SAT
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
It is a long time that I took a KOREAN SAT, it is a important test in Korean people. Because I think Korea is academic clique. To go to a good university, they have to get a great score in KOREAN SAT. the People in a good university have advantage when they are looking for a job. Also, they are respected from the people around. In this reason, KOREA SAT is a important in Korean people.
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Hi [이름] Ho! T[이름]k you for pointing out the importance of the Korean SAT by giving examples.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
It is a long time that I took a KOREAN SAT,
>>It was a long time ago when I took the Korean SAT.
it is a important test in Korean people.
>>It is an important test for Korean people.
Because I think Korea is academic clique.
>>Because I think Koera gives importance to academic clique.
To go to a good university, they have to get a great score in KOREAN SAT.
>>CORRECT
the People in a good university have advantage when they are looking for a job.
>>People who are from good universities have an advantage when they are looking for a job.
Also, they are respected from the people around.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They are respected by different people.
In this reason, KOREA SAT is a important in Korean people.
>>With all this reasons, Korean SAT is important for Korean people.
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