About laughter
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel good when I hear the sound of laughter.
There is a old woman who laughs well and loudly in my church.
I think that her laughter makes her beautiful and makes me feel better good.
I think that the sound of laughter is not infectious, but the feelings of laughter is infectious.
I have a lot of smile rather than laughter.
When I think about love and grace of GOD, It makes me smile most of the time.(or I mostly smile.)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Both laughing and smiling are good.
It\'s nice to lift our spirits up.
I hope you have a good weekend.
See you next week!^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I feel good when I hear the sound of laughter.
>> Correct
There is a old woman who laughs well and loudly in my church.
There is a old woman who laughs well and loudly in my church.
>> There is an old woman who laughs well and loudly in my church.
I think that her laughter makes her beautiful and makes me feel better good.
I think that her laughter makes her beautiful and makes me feel better good.
>> I think that her laughter makes her beautiful and it makes me feel good, too.
I think that the sound of laughter is not infectious, but the feelings of laughter is infectious.
I think that the sound of laughter is not infectious, but the feelings of laughter is infectious.
>> Correct
I have a lot of smile rather than laughter.
I have a lot of smile rather than laughter.
>> I smile more often than I laugh.
When I think about love and grace of GOD, It makes me smile most of the time.(or I mostly smile.)
When I think about love and grace of GOD, It makes me smile most of the time.(or I mostly smile.)
>> When I think about the love and grace of GOD, it makes me smile most of the time.
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