about learning new things

2011-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Nowadays I have to learn lots of new things like computer, second language and so on. When I learned new things, I feel happy even if thoese are difficult. And also realized some people really don't like learning new things. There are some reasons in it. One is They want to keep using existing things. They don't need new and don't accept. Other group are They feel afraid when they watch and see new things. because It looks very difficult and useless. Last group is they denied new things and criticize all things. At first I don't like last group also criticized when I encountered. But now I can understand that group. Time goes by, my feeling is not the same as before. Finally I understand old generation. I will also change my mind when I encounter new things. I accept those happily.

강사 첨삭

[이름], thanks for the composition. I hope you will have time to check each composition that you passed and try to learn from the corrections. Try your best not to do same mistakes over and over. Thanks and always have a great day!! Be patient!!! Lei J   Nowadays I have to learn lots of new things like computer, second language and so on. >>I have to learn a lot of things nowadays, like computer and second language. When I learn new things, I feel happy even if these are difficult. >>correct And also realized some people really don't like learning new things. >>And I also realized that some people really don't like learning things. There are some reasons in it. >>There are some reasons behind it. One is They want to keep using existing things. >>One is that they want to keep using the things that they have. They don't need new and don't accept. >>They don't like change. Other group are They feel afraid when they watch and see new things. >>The other group is those who feel afraid when they watch and try new things. because It looks very difficult and useless. >>correct Last group is they denied new things and criticize all things. >>The last group is when people deny new things and criticize these things. At first I don't like last group also criticized when I encountered. >>correct But now I can understand that group. >>correct Time goes by, my feeling is not the same as before. >>correct Finally I understand old generation. >>Finally I understand the old generation. I will also change my mind when I encounter new things. >>correct I accept those happily. >>I will accept them happily.

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