About life in Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher sheila.
I think there is a generation gap.
It was easy for men to live in my parents\' generation. Because of our traditional culture that a patriarchal society. In a generation a little older t[이름] me, patriarchal culture has disappeared, making it easier for women to live. But, recently feminist policies went over line. So ignorant men began to recognize that it was a wrong policy. But still, I think it is easier for women to live in my country t[이름] most countries.
I\'m thinking of taking a break for a week or two and applying for class again.
T[이름]k you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ho! T[이름]k you for always taking the time to do your homework! Your homework is special today! You almost got a perfect score! :)
You are always welcome to come back. Have a good rest.
Until the next one!
See you in class next time!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
It was easy for men to live in my parents\' generation.
>>CORRECT
Because of our traditional culture that a patriarchal society.
>>Because of our traditional culture which is a patriarchal society.
In a generation a little older t[이름] me, patriarchal culture has disappeared, making it easier for women to live.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In the generation a little older t[이름] me, patriarchal culture has lessened, making it easier for women to live.
But, recently feminist policies went over line.
>>But recently, femenist policies went over the line.
So ignorant men began to recognize that it was a wrong policy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, ignorant men began to claim that it was a wrong policy.
But still, I think it is easier for women to live in my country t[이름] most countries.
>>CORRECT
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