About Living a healthy life
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm so sorry about yesterday.
I found that there was some differences.
I had not known the difference, But I found some difference after few minutes.
- About living a healthy life -
1. I have to exercise everyday for my health.
2. I have to have some positive thinking.
3. I have to get rid of my stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, Your ideas are great and I think so too that we have to think healthy to stay healthy; think positive and be stress free. We should always have time to relax and enjoy things. Thank you for a beautiful night of conversation you shared with me. You have to be careful of your articles on your sentences. I'll see you tomorrow! ^^,
Teacher Carly
I\'m so sorry about yesterday.
>>CORRECTI found that there was some differences.
>>CORRECTI had not known the difference.
>>CORRECT
But I found some difference after few minutes.
>> But I found some difference after a few minutes.- About living a healthy life -1. I have to exercise everyday for my health.
>>CORRECT2. I have to have some positive thinking.
>>CORRECT
>>OR I should have some positive thinking.
>>OR I should be a positive thinker.3. I have to get rid of my stress.
>>CORRECT
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