About Living a healthy life

2012-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

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I'm so sorry about yesterday. I found that there was some differences. I had not known the difference, But I found some difference after few minutes. - About living a healthy life - 1. I have to exercise everyday for my health. 2. I have to have some positive thinking. 3. I have to get rid of my stress.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, Your ideas are great and I think so too that we have to think healthy to stay healthy; think positive and be stress free. We should always have time to relax and enjoy things. Thank you for a beautiful night of conversation you shared with me. You have to be careful of your articles on your sentences. I'll see you tomorrow! ^^, Teacher Carly I\'m so sorry about yesterday. >>CORRECTI found that there was some differences. >>CORRECTI had not known the difference. >>CORRECT But I found some difference after few minutes. >> But I found some difference after a few minutes.- About living a healthy life -1. I have to exercise everyday for my health. >>CORRECT2. I have to have some positive thinking. >>CORRECT >>OR I should have some positive thinking. >>OR I should be a positive thinker.3. I have to get rid of my stress. >>CORRECT

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