About married life
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Hi, teacher Sheila
I had not felt fears. But sometimes I worried about our future that if I will not get a lot of money, how to raise my children. And I also worried about we don\'t have enough money now, So we live in a rented apartment. It is hard to live with my children because an apartment is small. I think the problem is lack of money in my married life. Of course, the relationship with the wife is important, but now there is no problem and we will.
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Hello [이름] Ho! I understand your situation. It is hard to live but I know that you and your wife will get through this.
I hope that this will not affect you greatly but make this as your motivation to work harder.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have no fears.
But sometimes I worried about our future that if I will not get a lot of money, how to raise my children.
>>But sometimes, I\'m worried about our future like if I will not earn a lot of money, how will I raise my children.
And I also worried about we don\'t have enough money now, So we live in a rented apartment.
>>And, I\'m also worried about having not enough money now so we live in a rented apartment.
It is hard to live with my children because an apartment is small.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It is hard to live in an apartment with my children.
I think the problem is lack of money in my married life.
>>I think the problem is the lack of money in my married life.
Of course, the relationship with the wife is important, but now there is no problem and we will.
>>Of course, the relationship with the wife is important but now there is no problem and we are well.
OR>>Of course my relationship with my wife is important but we are still well since we don\'t have problems.
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